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Subject: Re: an attempt at flash fiction
Author: Malk   (Authenticated as Malk)
Date: October 21, 2011 at 12:32:43 PM
Reply to: an attempt at flash fiction by Fiammetta
I agree with La Reina. It needs to be self-contained, this feels like a part of another piece and we're left waiting for the next part.

Mum to Mousie, Foo and Bumptious
Proper names are poetry in the raw. Like all poetry they are untranslatable. - W.H. Auden

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