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Re: an attempt at flash fiction |
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Malk (Authenticated as Malk) |
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October 21, 2011 at 12:32:43 PM |
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an attempt at flash fiction by Fiammetta |
I agree with La Reina. It needs to be self-contained, this feels like a part of another piece and we're left waiting for the next part.
Mum to Mousie, Foo and Bumptious
Proper names are poetry in the raw. Like all poetry they are untranslatable. - W.H. Auden
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- an attempt at flash fiction - Fiammetta Oct 20 2011, 12:49:40 PM
- Re: an attempt at flash fiction - Malk Oct 21 2011, 12:32:43 PM
- Well... - La Reina Oct 21 2011, 6:07:53 AM