Is it too realistic for you or just confusing? Just wondering,
It's based on The Character Riley's life and after life ( his friends deal after he is gone.)it's kind of like a series.
I am working on the younger years of Riley at the same time.
But Azdar is jealous of Riley and Adrea (his ex-wife). Adrea told Azdar she wanted Riley gone (not sure if it's suppose to be a joke yet) but He takes her serious.
One of perhaps many scenarios is Adrea making sure she gets custody of the Kid, Jeanie Gray. (Riley is the father)
maybe it's not your genre?
What kind of Genre am I writing?
P.s in another story related Tzar is a prostitute and Riley's Cousin Kolvin is in love with Tzar.and is trying to get him out of that lifestyle...
not to be confused with Treznor-Riley's best friend, Who had dated Daisy for a while.
Daisy is Riley's friend too, And She helps research info for the upcoming trial for Tzar. Treznor is now dating a girl name Silk who is not sure yet...here is a snippet of Riley and his personality when he was alive.
Riley looking for water in the desert
Riley got off the bus. The heat sweltered at a balmy 109 degrees. Sweat dribbled down his forehead- “Ah, a nice day,” Riley told them. People groaned,” Stupid freak and he must be stupid. “Sure beats Minnesota’s winters eh?” He said enthusiastically.
So they went and saw the exhibits. Riley stared at the exhibits but his eyes seem to play an optical illusion on him. The sunshine was blinding, shining at an angle where Riley couldn’t see the time on his watch. He drank the last of the water from his canteen unaware that the tour group had gathered and hopped on the bus without him.
Panic struck Riley like a sonic boom, “Wait,” he screamed silently, as he ran out of the exhibit building and met with some cloudy dust.
“Ah Skittles,” Riley said out loud
He wandered some time, not thinking, his thirst ached, his throat parched….
“Hey Cacti,” Riley said as he approached a brown and green cactus. “I need a hug,”
Riley told it and wrapped his arms around it. The needles pricked his skin,” Ouch, you bit me, you Siamese Porcupine,”
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