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Subject: Oh, Neddy.
Author: La Reina   (Authenticated as La Reina)
Date: November 28, 2011 at 6:32:44 AM
Reply to: Re: A game, anyone? by CN
I love that it's all dialogue with no narration. For some reason it just strikes me as a particularly nice trick for this piece. And oh! Neddy is really disconnected there. May we see if she ever manages to get a horse at the end? And, for bonus points, give the horse (or un-horse, or would-have-been-horse) a very unfitting name.


Glossary of La Reinaisms

Aheheh: onomatopoeia for a chuckle, esp. a mischievous one
Hurm: onomatopoeia for thinking; a standard reply when all else fails
Spam: an all-purpose word

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