Thank you. I never thought I'd write a "Twilight" parody, but it's fun. It's so easy to poke fun of. :)
I think you're right about the MC having too much logic and sense in that scene. Olivia is a dingbat, just like Isabella Swan. It would make a lot more sense for her to think five minutes was PLENTY of time to determine that Marius is her soul mate.
"An intellectual says a simple thing in a hard way. An artist says a hard thing in a simple way."
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