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Thank you. I never thought I'd write a "Twilight" parody, but it's fun. It's so easy to poke fun of. :)

I think you're right about the MC having too much logic and sense in that scene. Olivia is a dingbat, just like Isabella Swan. It would make a lot more sense for her to think five minutes was PLENTY of time to determine that Marius is her soul mate.

"An intellectual says a simple thing in a hard way. An artist says a hard thing in a simple way."
-Charles Bukowski

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    • since you asked for it... - Fiammetta  Dec 23 2011, 1:33:48 PM
      • *nods slowly* - La Reina  Dec 23 2011, 7:43:19 PM
        • right (m) - Fiammetta  Dec 23 2011, 8:24:10 PM
          • Oh, well... - La Reina  Dec 24 2011, 5:56:26 AM
  • Re: The Editing Game - Parfaitcheri  Dec 22 2011, 6:57:08 PM
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