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| Subject: | Re: Can I get another critique? |
| Author: | Fiammetta (Authenticated as lady murasaki) |
| Date: | January 25, 2012 at 5:22:40 AM |
| Reply to: | *Took down flashfic for publication reasons* by weloveyoujamesarness |
Overall it's a nice piece and I like the idea of the parody, only it wasn't clear at all it was a parody. I had the same reaction as Arcadia. So that's something you might want to address.
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