the points you made were valid and useful, thank you :)
to "explain" why I lack description in some areas is because my English teachers told me to ease up on describing my characters and build them throughout the story line. You were right to say that Maiara is a ghost because essentially she is. The story is set up as Charles Rims' journal and he's recounting his life.
as for the confusion of the anthropomorphic actions amongst the Shadrachs' and Maiara towards Charles is better understood if you read the whole story; which I'm delighted to hear that it had piqued your interest :)
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