|Author:||Calla (guest, 184.108.40.206)|
|Date:||March 30, 2012 at 9:17:00 AM|
|Reply to:||Finn by thefancyapple|
What's lightning-colored hair? White? Goldish? I've seen blue and even red lightning before.
The wings part and the fact he's an astronaut took me by surprise. I wasn't expecting to read either of those things.
I think you should definitely change his name from Howl--you're right, it's too obvious and if you get this published and readers immediately put it together they might draw too many parallels to the original story and yours and call you a copycat.
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