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Subject: Critique thread (also with a twist)
Author: Fiammetta   (Authenticated as lady murasaki)
Date: April 5, 2012 at 11:20:26 AM
As I'm officially on holiday, here's the game I volunteered to host. It's basically a variation of the time-honoured feedback thread, where you post a piece of your writing for others to critique. However, in this case when you critique someone's writing you will have to answer the following questions:

- how would you briefly describe the overall mood of this piece?

- what are its strong points?

- and its weak ones? any suggestions for changes and edits?

- if the piece isn't self-contained, how do you expect it to go from here?

This message was edited by the author on April 6, 2012 at 2:01:56 AM

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