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Subject: I've never seen the movie...
Author: RoxStar   (Authenticated as RoxStar)
Date: May 28, 2012 at 5:40:44 PM
Reply to: Possible Fantasy/Adventure Story by Kinola
So I can't say for sure whether your story rips the movie off too much, but in general I'd say that's something to guard against.

Triplets and other multiples are done to death.

Also, this is so flower-heavy a bunch of names that the pollen is collecting on my monitor.

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