...just want to let you know that Sophie is dealing with things atm, and she hasn't forgotten all about you (haha, direct quote) and she'll Skype you or send you a message when she can. She also really likes your idea about Etieene being narrator or something.
By the way, your story is excellent. I'm dying to know what happens! The exchanges between Irene and the main character feel really real. I hope you don't mind if I read the next rounds as well.