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Subject: Which of these lines has the most impact?
Author: JessaRose   (Authenticated as dancingintherain)
Date: June 10, 2012 at 8:44:13 AM
Its going to be on the first lines in a prologue. Its a bit dramatic.

1. I was two years old when my mother committed suicide.

vs.

2. My mother committed suicide when I was two years old.


I'm leaning towards the first at the moment...

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