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| Subject: | Which of these lines has the most impact? |
| Author: | JessaRose (Authenticated as dancingintherain) |
| Date: | June 10, 2012 at 8:44:13 AM |
Its going to be on the first lines in a prologue. Its a bit dramatic.
1. I was two years old when my mother committed suicide.
vs.
2. My mother committed suicide when I was two years old.
I'm leaning towards the first at the moment...
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