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| Subject: | Re: Which of these lines has the most impact? |
| Author: | Ludwig (Authenticated as blaaarg) |
| Date: | June 17, 2012 at 7:23:27 PM |
| Reply to: | Re: Which of these lines has the most impact? by Billina |
I disagree, it's slightly overdramatic but I think Billina's solutions weaken it way too much, and I think the first one's fine.
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