|Subject:||Re: Which of these lines has the most impact?|
|Author:||Ludwig (Authenticated as blaaarg)|
|Date:||June 17, 2012 at 7:23:27 PM|
|Reply to:||Re: Which of these lines has the most impact? by Billina|
I disagree, it's slightly overdramatic but I think Billina's solutions weaken it way too much, and I think the first one's fine.
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