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Subject: what am I missing?
Author: RoxStar   (Authenticated as RoxStar)
Date: September 25, 2012 at 2:53:08 PM
Reply to: How does this sound? by Alison
I don't get it. Did the guys take the two girls out for the express purpose of punching them out? Why would Lunette put her friend in that position?

And why is Hope such a liar? What does she have to hide? Why is she such a damn phony? She and Lunette are like black holes, there seems to be nothing genuine about them. Lunette's boyfriend beats her up. She just takes it, and sets Hope up for the same treatment. I can sort of see why Hope's date might hit her, since she lied to him the whole evening. But what was the issue between Kyle and Lunette? It almost sounds like their date was simply to get slugged.

I'm sorry, I just don't get it. And I feel no connection toward any of the characters. I know I'm supposed to feel sorry for the girls, but I can't. They are just such total shallow blahs. Hope chanting and spinning in a circle about going to a store is so out of place it doesn't make any sense.

The whole thing is forced and weird.

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