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Because here you are again.

My advice is: don't post your writing looking for feedback if you don't want honest feedback.

Your writing has some potential but it needs a LOT of work. It will not improve unless and until you decide to improve it. Right now, you think your writing is brilliant, so you won't make any effort to make it any better. Anything we say now is just going to go in one ear and out the other ear so why bother?

Come back when you are mature enough to take constructive criticism and are willing to write something that's halfway readable.

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• The story: Death is Unpredictable (PREFACE AND CHAPTER ONE) - Alison  Sep 27 2012, 1:43:27 PM
  • Re: The story: Death is Unpredictable (PREFACE AND CHAPTER ONE) - Billina  Sep 28 2012, 2:37:53 PM
    • ditto about the physical descriptions... - RoxStar  Sep 28 2012, 3:10:37 PM
      • Re: ditto about the physical descriptions... - Alison  Sep 29 2012, 5:09:51 PM
      • Mitochondrial disease - MoonAgeDaydreamer  Sep 28 2012, 5:11:30 PM
      • Re: ditto about the physical descriptions... - Billina  Sep 28 2012, 3:38:46 PM
        • Re: ditto about the physical descriptions... - Alison  Sep 29 2012, 5:11:16 PM
          • Re: ditto about the physical descriptions... - Billina  Sep 29 2012, 6:01:53 PM
  • Re: The story: Death is Unpredictable (PREFACE AND CHAPTER ONE) - Ludwig  Sep 28 2012, 10:40:16 AM
  • you must not be all that torn up over the reaction to the last stories... - RoxStar  Sep 28 2012, 6:19:52 AM
    • Dude - Ludwig  Sep 28 2012, 10:11:30 AM