Because here you are again.
My advice is: don't post your writing looking for feedback if you don't want honest feedback.
Your writing has some potential but it needs a LOT
of work. It will not improve unless and until you decide to improve it. Right now, you think your writing is brilliant, so you won't make any effort to make it any better. Anything we say now is just going to go in one ear and out the other ear so why bother?Come
back when you are mature enough to take constructive criticism and are willing to write something that's halfway readable.