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Subject: you must not be all that torn up over the reaction to the last stories...
Author: RoxStar   (Authenticated as RoxStar)
Date: September 28, 2012 at 6:19:52 AM
Reply to: The story: Death is Unpredictable (PREFACE AND CHAPTER ONE) by Alison
Because here you are again.

My advice is: don't post your writing looking for feedback if you don't want honest feedback.

Your writing has some potential but it needs a LOT of work. It will not improve unless and until you decide to improve it. Right now, you think your writing is brilliant, so you won't make any effort to make it any better. Anything we say now is just going to go in one ear and out the other ear so why bother?

Come back when you are mature enough to take constructive criticism and are willing to write something that's halfway readable.

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