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Maybe "hair the color of caramel" would be better than "caramel hair." The latter makes me think her hair is actually made of caramel.

"An intellectual says a simple thing in a hard way. An artist says a hard thing in a simple way."
-Charles Bukowski

"And by the way, dearie, your punctuation sucks canal water!"
-The ghost of Vivian Vance

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• The story: Death is Unpredictable (PREFACE AND CHAPTER ONE) - Alison  Sep 27 2012, 1:43:27 PM
  • Re: The story: Death is Unpredictable (PREFACE AND CHAPTER ONE) - Billina  Sep 28 2012, 2:37:53 PM
    • ditto about the physical descriptions... - RoxStar  Sep 28 2012, 3:10:37 PM
      • Re: ditto about the physical descriptions... - Alison  Sep 29 2012, 5:09:51 PM
      • Mitochondrial disease - MoonAgeDaydreamer  Sep 28 2012, 5:11:30 PM
      • Re: ditto about the physical descriptions... - Billina  Sep 28 2012, 3:38:46 PM
        • Re: ditto about the physical descriptions... - Alison  Sep 29 2012, 5:11:16 PM
          • Re: ditto about the physical descriptions... - Billina  Sep 29 2012, 6:01:53 PM
  • Re: The story: Death is Unpredictable (PREFACE AND CHAPTER ONE) - Ludwig  Sep 28 2012, 10:40:16 AM
  • you must not be all that torn up over the reaction to the last stories... - RoxStar  Sep 28 2012, 6:19:52 AM
    • Dude - Ludwig  Sep 28 2012, 10:11:30 AM