I agree. Sometimes, when a writer has too many stories on their plate, they can get *really* confusing and muddled and not live up to their potential. I know you said you have ADHD, but it might be worth it to try to find a way to focus on only one or two stories at time. I think your voice would be more clear if you were to do that.
"An intellectual says a simple thing in a hard way. An artist says a hard thing in a simple way."
"And by the way, dearie, your punctuation sucks canal water!"
-The ghost of Vivian Vance