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Subject: Re: The Purest Love (PREFACE, CHAPTER ONE, AND PART OF CHAPTER TWO)
Author: Billina   (Authenticated as Billina)
Date: September 30, 2012 at 9:22:53 AM
Reply to: Re: The Purest Love (PREFACE, CHAPTER ONE, AND PART OF CHAPTER TWO) by Fiammetta
I agree. Sometimes, when a writer has too many stories on their plate, they can get *really* confusing and muddled and not live up to their potential. I know you said you have ADHD, but it might be worth it to try to find a way to focus on only one or two stories at time. I think your voice would be more clear if you were to do that.

"An intellectual says a simple thing in a hard way. An artist says a hard thing in a simple way."
-Charles Bukowski

"And by the way, dearie, your punctuation sucks canal water!"
-The ghost of Vivian Vance

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