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| Subject: | Re: Short Story |
| Author: | Billina (Authenticated as Billina) |
| Date: | October 14, 2012 at 12:52:32 PM |
| Reply to: | Short Story by Kinola |
Why is the older sister strongly disliked? Why is the younger sister favored? I don't know enough about the story to give you advice, but I think there would be a bit of resentment on the older sister's part. I need more details, though.
"An intellectual says a simple thing in a hard way. An artist says a hard thing in a simple way."
-Charles Bukowski
"And by the way, dearie, your punctuation sucks canal water!"
-The ghost of Vivian Vance
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