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Subject: Re: Short Story
Author: Billina   (Authenticated as Billina)
Date: October 14, 2012 at 12:52:32 PM
Reply to: Short Story by Kinola
Why is the older sister strongly disliked? Why is the younger sister favored? I don't know enough about the story to give you advice, but I think there would be a bit of resentment on the older sister's part. I need more details, though.

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