|Subject:||Re: An attempt of a prologue & first chapter. + Other scenes in the 'story'|
|Author:||JessaRose (Authenticated as dancingintherain)|
|Date:||October 17, 2012 at 1:52:29 AM|
|Reply to:||Re: An attempt of a prologue & first chapter. + Other scenes in the 'story' by SlyRook|
Thank you for taking the time to take a good look! It's relieving when someone says they're intrigued.
I'm hoping with by introducing various 'beings' I might kind of avoid the vampire cliche (the initial main focus is a succubus)... But its a cliche that's worked so far for most!
Wander probably is what I mean... nitpicking is good, I'm very bad at doing it on my own work, grammar was never my forte.
I also tend to drag my sentences out! Thanks again for your thoughts!
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