|Subject:||Re: Should I keep writing on this or should I start over?|
|Author:||Julia Elisabeth (Authenticated as Dahlis)|
|Date:||January 2, 2013 at 12:30:18 PM|
|Reply to:||Should I keep writing on this or should I start over? by Kelsey|
I thought it was interesting, a well written start for sure, but personally I like a bit more description in between the lines of a dialogue, especially when it's about tense topics like this. Every now and then, I'd like Payton to look up and scan her sister's face for emotions. But that's just me.
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