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Subject: Re: Should I keep writing on this or should I start over?
Author: Julia Elisabeth   (Authenticated as Dahlis)
Date: January 2, 2013 at 12:30:18 PM
Reply to: Should I keep writing on this or should I start over? by Kelsey
I thought it was interesting, a well written start for sure, but personally I like a bit more description in between the lines of a dialogue, especially when it's about tense topics like this. Every now and then, I'd like Payton to look up and scan her sister's face for emotions. But that's just me.


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