|Subject:||Re: Could I Please Get Some Opinion On this Prologue/First Chapter.|
|Author:||JessaRose (Authenticated as dancingintherain)|
|Date:||January 3, 2013 at 12:44:25 AM|
|Reply to:||Re: Could I Please Get Some Opinion On this Prologue/First Chapter. by Julia Elisabeth|
Thank you for taking a look and pointing out the things that could do with some work!
I really appreciate all your comments, and I will go through and work on the areas you suggested! They're all really helpful!
I'm also really glad you enjoyed it :)
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