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Subject: Re: Could I Please Get Some Opinion On this Prologue/First Chapter.
Author: JessaRose   (Authenticated as dancingintherain)
Date: January 3, 2013 at 12:44:25 AM
Reply to: Re: Could I Please Get Some Opinion On this Prologue/First Chapter. by Julia Elisabeth
Thank you for taking a look and pointing out the things that could do with some work!

I really appreciate all your comments, and I will go through and work on the areas you suggested! They're all really helpful!

I'm also really glad you enjoyed it :)

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