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| Subject: | Re: Should I keep writing on this or should I start over? |
| Author: | Fiammetta (Authenticated as lady murasaki) |
| Date: | January 3, 2013 at 9:22:36 AM |
| Reply to: | Should I keep writing on this or should I start over? by Kelsey |
It's well-written but, for my personal taste at least, there's too much dialogue, some of which at the beginning seems a bit slow. Also, I'm confused as to the dad, has he left the family for another woman, is he dying or both?
My cooking experiment: http://lagerusalemmecucinata.blogspot.ch/
~formerly known as Murasaki~
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