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Subject: Agree (m)
Author: Fiammetta   (Authenticated as lady murasaki)
Date: January 6, 2013 at 8:26:21 AM
Reply to: Re: Does this sound too whiny? by RoxStar
She's not very likable, with her obvious contempt for her dad. The premise could work well, but I think this could do with some redrafting.

My cooking experiment:

~formerly known as Murasaki~

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