|Author:||Fiammetta (Authenticated as lady murasaki)|
|Date:||January 6, 2013 at 8:26:21 AM|
|Reply to:||Re: Does this sound too whiny? by RoxStar|
She's not very likable, with her obvious contempt for her dad. The premise could work well, but I think this could do with some redrafting.
My cooking experiment: http://lagerusalemmecucinata.blogspot.ch/
~formerly known as Murasaki~
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