|Subject:||Re: Agree (m)|
|Author:||Julia Elisabeth (Authenticated as Dahlis)|
|Date:||January 6, 2013 at 9:48:43 AM|
|Reply to:||Agree (m) by Fiammetta|
Thank you for your thoughts!
Yes, I can now see that she seems quite bitchy, but isn't that quite natural? After all, she is just a little girl that's very upset with her family situation and takes it out on her dad. If she was a perfect daughter, of course she would try to support her dad, but I thought that maybe this way, she sounds more ... believable and real.
And yes, I know it needs to be redrafted. This was a rough translation, since it's not written in English :)
"I'm not lost, I just want you to find me"
Lost - Six60
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