|Subject:||Re: My Opener: Is it Effective?|
|Author:||Cherryfrog (guest, 220.127.116.11)|
|Date:||January 12, 2013 at 6:45:11 AM|
|Reply to:||My Opener: Is it Effective? by trepak|
It is a tad overdone maybe but still okay to use but I only like it up until the '..book is true' part, from the 'Okay, your..' I'm put off. I think maybe it's just how the second half is worded, starting it with 'Okay' doesn't help.
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