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| Subject: | Re: My Opener: Is it Effective? |
| Author: | Cherryfrog (guest, 81.141.2.245) |
| Date: | January 12, 2013 at 6:45:11 AM |
| Reply to: | My Opener: Is it Effective? by trepak |
It is a tad overdone maybe but still okay to use but I only like it up until the '..book is true' part, from the 'Okay, your..' I'm put off. I think maybe it's just how the second half is worded, starting it with 'Okay' doesn't help.
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