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Subject: Re: Help me with opening lines?
Author: Alison   (Authenticated as Myth Writer Dreamer)
Date: January 22, 2013 at 10:21:28 AM
Reply to: Help me with opening lines? by trepak
Personally, I prefer the Dead people are annoying. Avoid them at all costs. That's something that would speak to me, from a fifteen year old's perspectives. If my age isn't your target audience, then I would suggest something else.

Let me explain. doesn't feel like a good opener to me. Now, as an ending to a paragraph, perfect! A quick summary of what's going on in a vague way and then that.

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