: Ditch the Charlie
and I think the name is very believeable as an ordinary person. Charlie
on a female character seems to be very typical and predictable.Brenton
: Just call him Brent
and be done with the messy middle step. Also, everybody knows who Draco
is, using his first name as a last name just screams "ripoff fanfic."Clarissa Christina
: I guess it works, but it's needlessly tongue-twisting.James
" Sparks: Can't stand Jamie
on a boy, but James
Sparks is nice.
Blaira Spelling: Blaira looks made-up fantasy fiction. Blair
Charron (pronounced like Sharron
: Call her Sharon
and be done with it.Scarlett Vladimir
: Screams "ripoff fanfic."Sabrina
"Brinny" Forester: Forrester is usually how it's spelled. Brynnie is overly cutesy and not really the best nn for Sabrina
might work. I keep thinking that Sabrina
Forrester is already a famous character but I don't know.
Fiamma/Fiammetta "Fia" Draco
: No good. Ripoff fanfic.
(High) Princess Viola
is very much a country-bumpkin name.
(Low) Princess Lavinia
is kind of a stereotypical princessy name.Emma Cassidy
doesn't really make sense as her nickname without context.Shevon
Daniels: Not great.Jeffrey
": Kind of a mouthful. Jeff
makes more sense as a nickname.Milo
Summers "Thorne": Again, the nickname seems random.Wenda
" Sparks: Just call her Wendy
Sparks. Why make things any more complicated than they have to be?
Tazma "Tazzy" : Whatever.
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