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Edgar feels a bit stodgy to me, it reminds me of the villain from the Aristocats I think is why. I don't know if seeing it in use would change that for me. Edge would be a good nickname, and I think would suit very well for a little boy. I do think pairing Edgar with something a bit lighter than Charles would help the combo, though the flow is good as is.

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Clarisse and Edgar feel off balance as siblings. Clarisse and Charles go wonderfully though.