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HelpRe: WDYT???????
in reply to a message by Emma Rose
They go nicely. But what I would suggest\my issues
Betheny (Bethany please)
Ace & Asa too similar
Asa, Kai & Spencer are for a boy. It makes no sense to have those names for a girl especially considering that there's only 1 daughter who actually has a female name and the rest of her sisters are sporting boy names.
If I were reading this story, I'd honestly assume that "Alyssa" was the only daughter and that's not a good thing.
Betheny (Bethany please)
Ace & Asa too similar
Asa, Kai & Spencer are for a boy. It makes no sense to have those names for a girl especially considering that there's only 1 daughter who actually has a female name and the rest of her sisters are sporting boy names.
If I were reading this story, I'd honestly assume that "Alyssa" was the only daughter and that's not a good thing.
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A lot of people think the same as you. I accidentally misspelled Bethany, but other than that, thanks for the advice!
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