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Subject: Re: Need help and suggestions (sorry, it's a long idea)
Author: Gawain   (guest, 67.142.165.26)
Date: March 14, 2012 at 6:41:54 PM
Reply to: Need help and suggestions (sorry, it's a long idea) by Rachael
I prefer Storyline A, as it doesn't seem as believable that a baby and kids would be sent to The Rooms. Plus you could have more potential for information being discovered and a stronger plot with older main characters.

In Storyline A, I'm not really sure what the dogs have to do with things. But maybe the girl has a dog and is threatened with having her dog turned into a killer. I wouldn't throw in superpowers as that has been pretty overdone recently.

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