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| Subject: | well, to be honest... |
| Author: | RoxStar (Authenticated as RoxStar) |
| Date: | June 5, 2012 at 3:13:21 PM |
| Reply to: | Critique my short story? by Rachael |
The writing itself isn't bad, I can see where it's striving for being lyrical.
But the story itself is so melodramatic and over the top tragic that I can't work up any sympathy for the characters. Also so stereotypical/tropey: the beautiful artistic mother, the father who wants a boy, the ugly, friendless redheaded girl who does nothing but write, just very predictable and tired.
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