|Subject:||Re: Which of these lines has the most impact?|
|Author:||Paronomasia (Authenticated as Paronomasia)|
|Date:||June 18, 2012 at 2:58:29 PM|
|Reply to:||Which of these lines has the most impact? by JessaRose|
Personally I think the second one has much greater impact because it introduces the concept of suicide at the very beginning of the sentence and it's later on that you find out how young the narrator was which furthers the impact. I would definitely go with the second.
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