I'm done with my writing finally! Yay, I'm so happy though I always doubt my skills. That's why I would like to post a short part of it because I see that others do that too and know your opinion. 'Cause I've noticed that people here are really smart, objective and some of them experienced so their critics would mean a lot to me. But I don't know which part of the story I should post. It has over 300 pages. What do you suggest? The beginning or rather some action from the middle?