|Subject:||Re: My Opener: Is it Effective?|
|Author:||Billina (Authenticated as Billina)|
|Date:||January 11, 2013 at 3:32:44 PM|
|Reply to:||My Opener: Is it Effective? by trepak|
I don't care for it. Granted, I don't know the context, but it sounds like an arrogant little kid is talking. Turns me off.
What is the story about, and who is speaking?
"An intellectual says a simple thing in a hard way. An artist says a hard thing in a simple way."
"And by the way, dearie, your punctuation sucks canal water!"
-The ghost of Vivian Vance
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