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Help[Opinions] Re: Sibset
in reply to a message by ella_bella314
Very el-heavy.
I don't see the point of using a show-off spelling of Sophie as a mn where it won't be noticed. And Ella is just another trendy name, though the boy names are themed. OK, there's a shortage of girl angels, but anything biblical would do. Rachael Sophie?
Gabriel is excellent; Gabe is suitable for a middle-aged, podgy truck driver. And the assonance of Gabriel Shane doesn't work well for me. I'd do a swap: Gabriel Brett and Raphael (or Rafael) Shane.
I don't see the point of using a show-off spelling of Sophie as a mn where it won't be noticed. And Ella is just another trendy name, though the boy names are themed. OK, there's a shortage of girl angels, but anything biblical would do. Rachael Sophie?
Gabriel is excellent; Gabe is suitable for a middle-aged, podgy truck driver. And the assonance of Gabriel Shane doesn't work well for me. I'd do a swap: Gabriel Brett and Raphael (or Rafael) Shane.
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