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HelpRe: Fake family
in reply to a message by Beth0808
They seem disjunct to me. I can see a gradual change of style though, so assuming this is for a story, that could be used with the parents' change of lifestyle/circumstances or something. Like they get more conservative and/or religious by the younger two. And Lorenzo seems out of left field, but it could be excused by being a family name. Zo and Izzy are a little contrived, though.
Also it has nothing to do with the names, but I'd have a hard time believing that a girl who's better than most boys at all sports would only do gymnastics and especially cheerleading. That was me in school, and I did a ton of sports, but definitely no cheerleading... also in my experience, that makes you the opposite of popular. Unless that also can be an aspect of their story too. Maybe she only does those two sports from peer pressure to stay cool and popular and girly or something.
Also it has nothing to do with the names, but I'd have a hard time believing that a girl who's better than most boys at all sports would only do gymnastics and especially cheerleading. That was me in school, and I did a ton of sports, but definitely no cheerleading... also in my experience, that makes you the opposite of popular. Unless that also can be an aspect of their story too. Maybe she only does those two sports from peer pressure to stay cool and popular and girly or something.
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