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Re: story characters
Winter on a boy is unbelievable. Rain and July are awkward, Brooke and June or River and Sunday might be better. Thomas sticks out like a sore thumb, Tommy might be more believable - ish. Harmonia is just no, Harmony, or Melody, maybe.I would change this to something like...
S: River
S: Tommie
D: Skye
D: June
D: MelodyThough IMO Tommie would still stick out incredibly.My constantly changing PNL:
http://www.behindthename.com/pnl/117870?sort=rating&pop=ewTop rated = Willow and Naomi :)
Bottom rated = Kacey and Kim :(
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