Re: story characters
in reply to a message by abster
Winter on a boy is unbelievable. Rain and July are awkward, Brooke and June or River and Sunday might be better. Thomas sticks out like a sore thumb, Tommy might be more believable - ish. Harmonia is just no, Harmony, or Melody, maybe.
I would change this to something like...
S: River
S: Tommie
D: Skye
D: June
D: Melody
Though IMO Tommie would still stick out incredibly.
My constantly changing PNL:
http://www.behindthename.com/pnl/117870?sort=rating&pop=ew
Top rated = Willow and Naomi :)
Bottom rated = Kacey and Kim :(
I would change this to something like...
S: River
S: Tommie
D: Skye
D: June
D: Melody
Though IMO Tommie would still stick out incredibly.
My constantly changing PNL:
http://www.behindthename.com/pnl/117870?sort=rating&pop=ew
Top rated = Willow and Naomi :)
Bottom rated = Kacey and Kim :(