I think it's very nice overall, though I admit that with very large sib sets it's hard for me to really analyse them.
However, I think I would change
Theodor Immanuel Philipp Ferdinand to
Theodor Philipp Immanuel Ferdinand, or else eliminate or change either
Philipp or
Ferdinand. The double F sounds of
Philipp and
Ferdinand bug me.
Miranda
"Come... you must eat my child." — From an unknown badfic.
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