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These are character names that I have came up with for my story (based on a high school setting).. please tell me what you think they should be or they are alright (does the name fit with how i described them???).... Thanks a bunch!!Girls:
Katrina Rockingham (Kat)- Tall, thin, light brown hair, blue eyes, Rich popular girl, everyone wants to be her but she is so horrible to peopleDanielle Robinson (Dani)- (main char)- Average height, Medium brown hair, brown eyes, Kind of tom-boyish, doesnt like big social events (her and her friends get invited to one of Kats parties), doesnt like stuck up people, in band (competes with Myradel at everything), has a crush on Reily JacksonEllenor Whitters (Ellie)- Short, Very long brown/redish hair, the outcast of the group, best friend of Dani, shy, very quite, wants to be popular and thin, thrives to get it, has a crush on WillMyradel Magure (M&M)- tall, long dark hair, dark brown eyes, pretty, best friend of Dani, kind of ditzy like, funny, in band, dating ShaneGywenth Sheffield (Gywen)- tormented by Kat, seeking revenge, x-lover of Will, wants to terminate Ellie's life, tall, masculine like, short redish hair, blue eyesMegan Whitters (Maggie)- tall, thin, Long wavy black hair, greenish eyes, very evil, sister of Ellie, be-littles her sister a lot, one of the popular girls in school, wants to be best friends with Kat but failsDolly Willows- Average height, Long blonde hair, blue eyes, x-lover of Shane, wants Shane back desperatlyGuys:
Reily Jackson - Tall, greenish-blue eyes,evenly tanned, blonde hair,jockish(doesnt take it to heart)also in band w/ Dani & M&M, friend of Kats but disapproves how treats ppl, developes a crush on DaniShane Longford- Tall, Skinny, short black hair,handsome, gorgous light green eyes, very smart, dorky and very clumsy, dating M&MWilliam Dailey (Will)- Tall, dark, mysterious, short dark brown hair, blue eyes, new to the school, joins into Dani's group, takes a liking to Ellie
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I am on chapter 15.. its slowly comeing to an end. But soon it shall be finished. I started my freshman year in high school (5 years ago)14 then. I know taking a long time with this. Lots of things had happened since then. I finished a play for school, have 2 poems published (www.poetry.com look up varrecchia to see what I have), also got my web site started (www.sareworld.com), graduated high school, then started college and now working a full time job. I completely for got about the story. I found it the other day when I was cleaning and thought since its been years why not finish. I mostly started it to seek revenge against some ppl now i dont feel the same.. maybe the story will have a different twist than it did when i started. Well any ways thanks for your suggestions.Back to writing I shall go.
Thanks again,
Sare Jane aka SareVee
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Well...I don't really care for most of them except Danielle, Ellenor (although I like the spelling Eleanor better), Shane, and William. I'm just okay with Megan and Katrina. Overall, they're nice names. Have you finished writing the story yet?
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Katrina is the perfect name for that character, I only know one Katrina, but I really hate her she's so stuck-up.
I love Danielle (Dani) for her character!!
Ellenor (Ellie) is a good name for the shy person.
Myradel is hard to pronounce. What about another M name like Melissa, Missy, Maggie, Magnolia, Macey, Mena, Mina, Mckenna.
Gywenth is ok if you use it how about Gweneth or Gwyneth for spelling.
Megan is a name I picture for a sweet nice girl, but if you use it how about the nickname Meg? Or you could just have her name Maggie.
Dolly- I don't know how aboout Jessie or Jena?
Reily is a good name for the character.
Same with Shane.
Will fits too.
Hope this helps, is this going to be a book? I'm interested in reading it if it is.
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Good names: perfect. Not sure about Dolly though. I suggest Kristin or Leah.Cheers and keep writing,
Cassie
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I don't see Dolly Willows as the girl you described. I suggest Deborah, Donna, Diana, or Daisy. Other than that, they call seem fine.
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I don't thing girl 1 should be named Katrina. How about Kelly, Jacqueline, or Dominique?
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i say it's totally cool..............i see no problem in it
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